The penciling for your first video is good, but things start going awry when you start coloring it in. The color feels... muted. It feels off, and doesn't match the tone of the rest of the drawing. If you're going for a cute pikachu, the coloring should be cute as well. I would recommend a more vibrant yellow and red for better contrast.
The second video is a tad busy. If I were to just look at the finished drawing, without seeing how it was made, it is a bit tricky to make out what is happening in the picture. If pikachu is supposed to be the focal point of the picture, she should stand out more. The way it is drawn now, my eyes are drawn to either pikachu's ear, or the door first, and then I see the rest of the picture. There's one small error with pikachu as well, female pikachu tails are heart shaped:
But once again, overall, you have talent! Keep at it!Statistics: Posted by Trainer Yellow — Fri Sep 22, 2017 9:53 pm
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